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keltyk |
Cold Poem Fresh Frozen
Jan 9 2008, 9:37 PM EST
Coldness sits in legs feetand brain Two thirty a.m. East Central Scotland January Creative faculties frozen Mind numb Quality of poetry basic to subzero A room with no heating That cold settles in throughout the hours even your eyes get too cold to work My hat wraps the brain Now I am repeating words I said brain again forgetting I had been there It is too cold to shower Bits of me itch Others are numb It's been a long time since i wrote a poem it's good to create sometimes you force it for its own sake fuck the quality K Emslie Mitchell 10/01/08 4 out of 4 found this valuable. Do you? |
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keltyk |
1. sex life once
Jan 9 2008, 9:55 PM EST
sex lifePoor fuckless me, Ha, I won't bitch I don't much care I had a sex life And sometimes it was exquisite sometimes romantic sometimes rough sometimes risky sometimes daring Fuckless old me It got tricky and complex It's only sex Only drive inner desire hard wired nature no big deal no beef Eroticism holds sway The same heart shoots blood round the viscerals for whatever its for no big deal No women in my size Not in chicken town which this evidently bloody is Winter settles in to the extremities and the fingers hit the keys for the hell of it I smell I'm cold I'm an island sand in the cracks it's kelp in the arse I'm not angry at any particular thing except crapness ignorance towny fuckwits dumbfuck attitudes provincial clowns drunk loudmouths staggering swearing in circles Fuckless in Gaza Shagless in Manilla Actually cancel that It's said for effect Bangless in Fife Hell there are more pressing things to be working at Fah... Fah Fiddle Fah 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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keltyk |
2. The Pest
Jan 9 2008, 10:07 PM EST
The Pestthrow aside the bed and rise Could use some heating though Wander round some check out not much not much to check in Bitchtown Short cold days Long nights not so warm not complaining telling Place needs tidying my bones are cold as lead shower would be advised, Not in this climate fella I'm wrapping up staying put if my blood would boil that would be fine Things must be done they don't do themselves lights need to burn guts need filled It won't be long before the job gestapo are on my case Keep sending the days I like each moment I won't complain spring will come It comes to us all 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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keltyk |
3. a favourable write up reposted
Jan 10 2008, 11:17 PM EST
I read your poems "Cold Poem Fresh Frozen" left me wanting to wrap myself round you to keep you warm bring you back to life... desire not sympathy "sex life once" I think you miss intimacy don't we all but you are right you have more pressing needs! "The Pest" optimism despite everything! I liked them very honest very real J 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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keltyk |
4. nuclear physics blues
Jan 10 2008, 11:56 PM EST
Look at him that Fineman making beautiful maths for the space between my ears as i try now to do a poem that artfully tells how this mind and Art before giants look puny bare and Lord almighty why make a song and dance Let's make it easy Major physicists are unco smart and this poesy a brassy hook for vanity 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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keltyk |
5. Day in the life of Whinin' Sonovabitch
Jan 11 2008, 12:08 AM EST
Cold? Remember Ivan Denisovitch 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
